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Wednesday 4 December 2019

Dean's mouses. Character description.

I used voice typing to help me write the description.

 The mouses eyes are Little and Sparkly and shiny. 
I can hear the mouse Squeak.
It feels nice and fluffy.
It smells nice Like flowers.
It likes to eat turnip Soup.
It's Grey Fluffy fur.

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3 comments:

  1. Zachary5 December 2019 at 10:22

    Hey dean I love the way you wrought the sentences and the cute mouse picture.Maybe next time you could number off the sentences.by ZAC.

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  2. Emily McCombie9 December 2019 at 10:25

    Kia ora Dean,
    I loved the way you used voice typing to support you with your writing.
    It has taught me that there are different ways of supporting children with their writing.
    In the future you could use 'Word Hippo' to help you choose different adjectives.
    I look forward to seeing your future posts.
    Miss McCombie

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  3. Lucy12 December 2019 at 09:41

    hey Dean
    i like you're big turnip mouse description
    did you think of putting some background decorations
    maybe next time you could add some more descriptions
    From Lucy.

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