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Thursday 9 July 2020

This is my warmest clothes

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  1. Kia ora Dean,
    I love that you are taking part in the Winter Learning Journey because it shows you want to keep learning over the holidays! Ka pai!
    I like that you have put a picture of yourself in your warm clothes and then labelled it using text boxes.
    Did you use read & write to help you write the sentences? You are now an expert at using it and listening (and editing) to your sentences you have written.
    Woops, you have just forgotten 1 full stop but all your other sentences have capital letters and full stops! Ka rawe te mahi (excellent work!)
    I hope you are enjoying your holidays!!
    Miss McCombie

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